Woah! That was something else. I had no idea. Very unique and interesting.
I have to say I liked it a lot. Doing the story from Ukyou's point of view
unquestionably worked the best. Seeing it through her eyes worked better
than any of the others

I would say that Akane should have had a more emotional reaction than what
was shown when the truth was revealed. Not enough...heartbreak perhaps.
Although I suppose the intial shock would have been overwhelming and other
emotions would filter in later. Shampoo was a little too cold about it as
well, but I attribute that to knowing the truth longer than the others and
wanting to look stronger then them under the circumstances. The final bit
of Ukyou offering her spatula was just the right touch to end the fic. 

D.B. Sommer