At 08:41 AM 11/12/98 -0500, you wrote:

END Chapter One
Don't ask... just do not ask.  I sat down with the intent of continuing
something... I tried... repeatedly, and it just wouldn't work... so,
feeling the need to write *something*, I began to type with Tenchi as a
basis, and this is the result.  Is it worthy of being continued?  Send
all comments here.
Thanks for reading,
PMasters (11-12-98)            

In a word, yes.  This time around it looks like Tenchi's bringing some
friends to the carnival.  While the last thing Tenchi needs is another
possessive girlfriend, it would be amusing to see how the boys react to the
Ryoko, Ayeka, Mihoshi, Kiyone, Washu..you get the picture.  You have a
decent setup here, flesh out the appropiate punchline. ^_^

Tempus S.

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Cause and effect, Chain of Events
All of the chaos makes perfect sense.
When you're spinning 'round, things come undone.
Welcome to Earth, 3rd Rock from the Sun.
  -"Third Rock From The Sun" by Joe Diffie


"Never play an Ace if a Two will do."-The Great Red Dragon in Bone.

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