" " Spoken Words
* * Actions
# # Thoughts
.... A lull or hesitation
I wrote this as an experiment in using only non descriptive words.
I let what the person is saying describe the enviroment, and what's going on.
It's also a little bit o' a joke.
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Another way around
by myrriden
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"Listen Ol' man! I ain't goin' with ya! I'm goin' back t' China
t' search fer a cure!"
"Growf!"
*bonk*
"That outta teach ya, ya freak."
*WHAM*
"guh..."
"Dad! How could you!"
....
"Well, I certaintly hope he's older."
"_I_ hope he's cute."
"I hate boys."
"They'll be here any second. Now girls, behave yourself."
*slam*
"Huh? A panda?"
"Oh my...are these friends of yours, father?"
"guh....uh uh!"
"Oh right. Some panda decides to kidnap somebody of the street,
and hold them here. Happens all the time, eh Kasumi?"
"Oh Nabiki."
"Hey, let me down, ya freak! You're scarin' them!"
*thud*
"Ite...Hi, I'm Saotome Ranma...sorry 'bout this."
chorus of *pikus*
"Ah! A fulfilled promise!"
*glomp!*
"guh?"
"Oh, I knew Genma wouldnt disappoint me...HUH?"
*plop*
"What the...hey, why'd he faint?"
"You're not exactly what we expected."
*poke*
"We didn't expect a girl."
"Please don't do that..."
"What? This?"
*POKE*
"Really, Nabiki! Hi, I'm Akane. Would you like to be friends?"
"Heh heh, S...sure."
"Do you know kenpo?"
"Yeah."
"Would you like to spar?"
"Sure, that'd be great."
"Now, give me everything you got, and try not to be a sore loser,
okay?"
"Okay."
*whoosh wham up down in around....*
"Hey! Stand still!" .... "Aren't you going attack?" .... "Alright,
this one's for real!"
*WHAM*
*tap*
"Gotcha..."
"How'd she...hey you're pretty good. You're lucky you aren't a boy,
though."
"Huh? Why?"
"'Cause I really hate boys."
*piku* "Uh........"
#Man, I'm glad Kasumi suggested a bath. After today', this feels
good! Man, I can't beleive pop actually dragged me here!#
....
#Well, enough fun...I better get outta here 'fore someone notices.#
*slide*
*drip*
....
*creak*
#Wha? Is someone comin' in here!?#
#shit! akane...naked...#
*two shared pikus*
"Hi! I'm Akane. What are you doing in our bath?"