From: Sean Gaffney <gaffney@iconn.net>
Date: Saturday, 07 November, 1998 10:58
Subject: Re: [FFML][LEMON][GunCats]Fire in The Veins Part 1

    The dialouge in these scenes just doesn't _quite_ seem right.

Perhaps 'these small

things', or 'these little things.' I mean May IS only 14. 'Old'

doesn't suit her.

Unless this is VERY playful and sarcastic it doesn't quite work.

May's not 14, she just looks it.  The first ish of GSC clearly states
her
age as 18, and that wasn't just Dark Horse covering things up.  She's
18.
She still has the body of a young girl because she takes special herbs
and
drugs to keep her body's growth arrested so that Ken will still find her
sexy.

Hey, blame Sonoda, not me. ^_^

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In the Japanese version May is 14 or 15 (I forget which), in
the translated version she aged a few years due to the malign
influence of American Censorship.

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