Subject: Re: [FFML][LEMON][GunCats]Fire in The Veins Part 1
From: George Mori
Date: 11/7/1998, 9:46 AM
To: Sean Gaffney , ffml@fanfic.com



Sean Gaffney wrote:

    The dialouge in these scenes just doesn't _quite_ seem right. Perhaps 'these small
things', or 'these little things.' I mean May IS only 14. 'Old' doesn't suit her.
Unless this is VERY playful and sarcastic it doesn't quite work.

May's not 14, she just looks it.  The first ish of GSC clearly states her
age as 18, and that wasn't just Dark Horse covering things up.  She's 18.
She still has the body of a young girl because she takes special herbs and
drugs to keep her body's growth arrested so that Ken will still find her
sexy.

Hey, blame Sonoda, not me. ^_^

    I could've SWORN there was a big hoopla stating that Dark Horse WAS covering things up
and she was actually fourteen, it happened around the time of everyone bitching about them
cutting a page in issue 2. Are you absolutely positive that that is the case? Cuz I KNOW
I've read that in a few places. Well, even if she is 18, Ken's STILL a sick bastard.

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