The dialouge in these scenes just doesn't _quite_ seem right. Perhaps 'these small
things', or 'these little things.' I mean May IS only 14. 'Old' doesn't suit her.
Unless this is VERY playful and sarcastic it doesn't quite work.

May's not 14, she just looks it.  The first ish of GSC clearly states her 
age as 18, and that wasn't just Dark Horse covering things up.  She's 18.
She still has the body of a young girl because she takes special herbs and 
drugs to keep her body's growth arrested so that Ken will still find her 
sexy.

Hey, blame Sonoda, not me. ^_^

--SG
--by the way, expect Complete Control 4 in a week or 2...