"Mike Allen" <m_k_allen@hotmail.com> wrote:

All comments, flames, MST's or other responses are welcome.  Let me know 
what you think.  Public comments are the most appreciated! 

What? Use the list to actually discuss fanfics instead of posting goofy
spam? What a novel concept! :p

Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter, particularly the first part with the
conflict between our heroes and the musk people. As for the ending, (1)
Genma-bashing in fanfics is just too easy, and (2) I really want to see
some indication of how the other Ranmas (including Ranko) feel about
what's happening to them. Presumably they should have the same mind as
the original, and it's got to bother them at least a little that they're
being pushed into marrying people who they (being Ranma) wouldn't have
chosen.


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics