-----Original Message-----
From: HARIJUBAL@aol.com <HARIJUBAL@aol.com>
To: ffml@fanfic.com <ffml@fanfic.com>
Date: Thursday, November 05, 1998 7:45 PM
Subject: Re: [FFML] your TM fic...

Personally, I think that the reporter could have been less low-key at the

end,

not yelling that whole "TENCHI=YOSHO+RYOKO" thing.  I'm more inclined to
believe that even a rag-reporter (and I'm assuming that she belongs to a
visual medium news-station) wouldn't just scream it out.
I got the distinct impression that she yelled "WOOO HOOO!!!" after that

little

bomb.

Very funny, though.

-Murmur the Fallen
who wonders about the obvious plot hole in there.  I thought that it was a

SI

but then that "TENCHI=YOSHO+RYOKO" thing killed that

Sue is having a hard time. She thought she had finally found her ticket to
the journalistic mainstream. She is very dedicated and wants very much to
be taken seriously. As for her being S.I., as Thor Odinson pointed out, Sue
isn't really my creation. Could you be more specific about the plot hole?
Maybe I can fix it or at least camouflage it real good.

Thanks all for taking the time to read and C&C.

Damien
damien_searight@msn.com