Subject: RE: [FFML] [Lemon][Corssifc][NC][Tentacle] A Demon's gotta do what a...
From: "Chan Wei Lik" <weimin@pl.jaring.my>
Date: 11/5/1998, 1:56 PM
To: "'FFML'" <ffml@fanfic.com>
Reply-to:

From: David Johnston

It had a few too many victims, I think, leading to a
monotonous "girl shows up, girl gets to zap a couple of
tentacle-soldiers, girl gets raped" format, repeated as many times as
necessary.

I couldn't believe I'd get overloaded from such a short fic. Usually it
takes a really long fic for that to set in.

I would, of course, have been happier if the demons had been defeated,
since I tend to prefer it when the good guys come out on top,

And putting in the goddesses was a mistake. Belldandy could dispell the lot
of them in one blast (She isn't 1st class unlimited for nothing you know).
Urd could drain them all without breaking a sweat.

although not necessarily without suffering in the process and perhaps
experiencing losses.

This is a dramatic fic.