From: David Johnston
It had a few too many victims, I think, leading to a
monotonous "girl shows up, girl gets to zap a couple of
tentacle-soldiers, girl gets raped" format, repeated as many times as
necessary.
I couldn't believe I'd get overloaded from such a short fic. Usually it
takes a really long fic for that to set in.
I would, of course, have been happier if the demons had been defeated,
since I tend to prefer it when the good guys come out on top,
And putting in the goddesses was a mistake. Belldandy could dispell the lot
of them in one blast (She isn't 1st class unlimited for nothing you know).
Urd could drain them all without breaking a sweat.
although not necessarily without suffering in the process and perhaps
experiencing losses.
This is a dramatic fic.