"Alan Harnum" <harnums@hotmail.com> wrote:

Dies Irae

Comments?

A frightening look at how things might go wrong. I think it's a
fundamental lesson for Ranma to learn, that no matter how many successes
he has, there are limits to what he'll be able to do, and that someday
he might find that he's taken on more than he can handle. Too bad he had
to learn the hard way.

I like the way that the events are revealed subtly and indirectly,
allowing the readers to fill in the gaps on their own. My only criticism
of the story would be that it seemed to go on a bit longer than
necessary. It's an effective story as is, but it might be moreso if it
made its point and ended.


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics