Lara Bartram <lara@emunix.emich.edu> wrote:

This is an official BML 

An *official* BML? Color me suitably impressed. :-)

Seriously, this is skillfully written as always, but I have a little
trouble buying into the premise.

Nabby as the school loan shark? Well, okay. That's fanfic convention,
but it's certainly possible. Nabby as her own enforcer? Sure, I can see
why she wouldn't want to rely on other people. But enforcing her
contracts by beating the snot out of the offending party is something I
really have trouble seeing her doing.

Don't you think she could come up with something a little less crude?
"Oh, don't worry about it, Tezuri. If you don't have the money, you
don't have the money. I'll just have to recoup my losses by selling some
of the photos I took of you last Thursday behind the.... What's that?
You found the money? Oh, good!"


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics