Enderphd@aol.com wrote:

okay guys, here goes! again questions and comments are welcome!

Enjoy!

Anyways, here's chapter two:

Are these people going to do anything except crawl in bed together?

Yes, yes, I know grass and the kitchen table present alternatives

but...

You thought that highly of it?
So far, all it seems to be (IMHO) is a watered down lemon/lime.  I
don't care for things of that nature too much...and I honestly car for
this even less.
However, in all fairness, the author does have some modicum of talent.
 Might I sugget that tis type of fic might not be the author's
particular style?  Perhaps a change of genre or series might be what's
needed.
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