Oh gods, that was so funny I nearly flipped my chair from laughing.

Couple tiny notes:

1. Quincy instructs Nadoko to make the visitor stew for 5 minutes. Then
she asks him how long to make the visitor wait and he says 3. I don't
think Nabiki would make that error.

2. Kasumi's genius comment actually SCARED me because you know, it's
frighteningly possible. Her maternal comments about Sylia, were, of
course, coincidentally appropriate but good. She also handled the mild
ret-con well. Nice characterization. (Actually, I thought all the
characterizations by writing style were well done, but Kasumi's part was
my fave, followed a very close second by Kuno and his _interesting_
fight scenes.)

3. TESLA is a great name to attach to a BGC fic.

4. Write more. Consider having Soun add a bit. That would be REAL
interesting if he follows the typical pattern...

Happy Halloween,

Nightman