Brian Yaple wrote:

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From: Jim Lazar <jimlazar@earthlink.net>
To: FFML <FFML@fanfic.com>
Subject: [FFML][DRAFT][EVA][Fanfic][Lime] Garden of EVA 0:6 - EVA Bites

EVA!

::sniff:: My first MST ::sniff:: I'm so happy. (note: this written before I've
read the MST) :)

Date: Wednesday, October 28, 1998 9:41 PM

Here's the next Garden of EVA. C&C or I'll never have any of the girls
naked again. :)

   Well...since you asked...don't say we didn't warn you... <EG>

Asked? I Threatened :):)

single bound. It's red cape fluttered in the wind as it took up a
mocking posture. Since her bullets weren't getting through the enemy's
AT field, and actually seemed to be bouncing off, Asuka toggled her
rifle to launch mortar shells and lobbed a steady stream of shells at
the base of the building.

    All:<blink>
    Erica: A cape????
    Brian: Since when was Moldiver a part of this story??
    Aerith:<deadpan> Ladies and Gentlemen: Obscure Anime Reference #1
    E/J: <facefault>

Gee, what do I have to do... put a big 'S' on the Angel's chest? :)

boys.> Rei started to go after the two Donner party wannabes, but then
saw Kensuke's situation.

     Brian: Donner party wannabes?
     Aerith: A little explaination would be in order.

Donner party was a group lost in the California mountains and resorted to
canabalism to survive. Damn, I thought it was well known enough event. Ah well.

    Aerith: Okay...nice job here.
    Brian: Just a few grammar errors here and there.
    Julia: Just how close *did* this come...
    Brian: <groan>
    Julia: <WHAPs Brian> Hentai!!  Anyway, just how close did this come to
the lemon line?
    Erica: Anyway, nice job!
    Brian: ...and....goodnight!

Goodnight.

(still happy).

Thanks.

::sniff::



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     Later, Kasumi found her father cradling her mother in his arms. He
had run out of tears to shed long ago, but the expression on his face
told the story. Kasumi calmly slid the door closed and knelt down
facing her father and mother. Tears flowed from her eyes, but she just
waited until her father spoke.

     After several minutes of silence, Soun asked with a scratchy
voice, "Kasumi dear. Will you please say goodbye to your mother and
then go get Mr. Saotome?" He didn't look up at his daughter once.

     "Of course, Father," Kasumi said. She stood up, took one of her
mother's hands in her's, and said a soft, "Goodbye, Mother. I'll keep
my promise."

Ranma-ototo: Please Save My Family - Part 2
3rd place, Aug 1998 Mini-Series, Best of Ranma Fanfiction Awards