Mike Allen wrote:

I've received two responses to this since I posted it.  I'm used to
getting more than that.  Did it suck?  Was the formatting such that you
kill-filed it?

Please, let me know.  I want to get better and I can't without C&C.

Whiningly yours,

Well, frankly I just think you're getting into the territory of more 
than I really wanted to know about Happosai.  You need to make this
story...shorter.