"Mike Allen" <m_k_allen@hotmail.com> wrote:

I've received two responses to this since I posted it.  I'm used to 
getting more than that.  Did it suck?  Was the formatting such that you 
kill-filed it?  

No, I just didn't have time to read it until recently. The formatting
was fine, and I liked the fic. The only problem with it is that at this
point I can't possibly see how the Happosai in the story can be the same
one we know. You're going to have to do a lot of work to show us how
this basically decent guy became a panty-stealing pervert. (And I hope
it isn't something cheesy like a personality-altering spell. :)


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics