I corrected the spelling mistakes you pointed out, but I've also had to 
pass the comments along to Hitomi, since she was the one who did most of 
the writing.

       "Yes, and Bruce Wayne has just discovered evidence that his son 

is

alive and well and living in Nerima Japan." 

{comma after "Nerima".  What evidence could that possibly be?  I mean, 

just

giving birth 9 months after the tryst is hardly conclusive.}

Genetic Testing, and Nodoka also told him, a long time ago.

{How could Wayne assess the boy's skill from a written file?}

He has SAensei's in Japan who he looks up to.  It was in an episode.

{Gee, I wonder what Tim's father thinks of that.}

I think the father is dead.

{Barbara Gordon:  Oh, Dad?  I'm flying to Japan with Bruce Wayne this 
weekend.
Demon Head Commissioner Gordon:  What!?}

I thought she worked for Wayne Enterprises.

{When did Ranma ever travel to a country where English was necessary?}

English is Universal

{Who says?  Regardless of the genetics, Genma was married to Nodoka 

when

Ranma was born, and raised him from a grub.  Panda-san has at least as 

much

claim to be called Ranma's father.}

I don't know.  Hitomi wrote that one.

{I find myself skeptical.  Ukyo now has a clear shot at the R-Man.  Why
give it up?}

Do you know how hard it is to run a restaurant, especially one that 
would need to be run only in the evening?  I've worked as a waitress in 
order to go to school, and seeing what the bosses went through to do 
things, it ain't easy.

       The young man with the long pigtail smiled grimly, "Where." 

{Question mark}

They state in the television show.

{Isn't Tim Drake an A student?}

He keeps having trouble with government stuff.  Once he told Bruce that 
he did things differently, so why follow the book.

       "Huh."  Robin replied as he avoided a needle to his back, "I
suppose the fact that none of us never seem to die adds to the 

illusion." 

{"ever"}

He talks that way.

The entire Nodoka part is Hitomi's.  I'll pass on the questions.

By the way, I figured out two of the puns.

Knight as in the Dark Knight
Knightmare as in a bad dream

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