Subject: Re: [FFML][Teaser][Ranma] The Few, The Proud, The Male Gender
From: "Nick Mcbile" <trikster@hotmail.com>
Date: 10/23/1998, 8:48 PM
To: ShortYes@aol.com
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

     "A tiny change, here." Pestilence gestured.

	Looking over at the Four Horsemen, Toltiir had to shake his >head.  *I 
get
Gods, Goddesses, Powerful Aliens and Ancient Dragons.  Why not the 
incarnation
of Death, War, Famine and Pestilence?* he thought.

Equale rights, man. equalle rights!!

Taking his eyes from
Pestilence and looking over at the other three Horsemen, "You do know 
that
this entry will be considered as having been made by all three of you 
as
well."

I'd complain about that but since the bet is over.....

    Seeing them all agree just sent shivers down Toltiir's spine.  
Although
he loved chaos and mischief, there was just something about these >four
individuals in front of him that just didn't sit well with him.  It 
might have
been the fact that all four of them represented something so similar 
to
Ragnarok for the Gods.

We do seem to have that effect. After all even gods die... and everyone 
must face judgment eventually.

 Shaking the feeling off, Toltiir looked into >the pool
and had to keep himself from smacking himself.  *I should have known 
better.
They do live up to their names though.*        

our porpouse, our reason to exist....


     Down on Asgard, several small events started a chain reaction, > 
a snowball effect if you will.  

<snip>

     Looking at the virus that that mortal had in his possession, 
Toltiir had
to turn and look at the Four Horsemen with a little respect.  "You 
guys do
have a sense of humor, sick as it is.  This entry has possibilities 
for
mischief gallore."

thank you. -_^

 Seeing how they were lined up, "I wager that
Pestiline
will be first to visit Asgard, next Death, then War.  I just don't >see 
where
you fit in Famine."  

    Smiling, "Wait for it," was the answer Famine gave Toltiir.


I would like to point out that I'm not limited to just starving people 
but controling lusts/cravings or rather hungers. Also our fields cross 
from time to time....



So what do you all think so far?  I've been told that this plotline 
had
recieved many negative reviews.  I do not know why.  I felt it had 
great
potiential, more so than many of the other bet storylines where Ranma 
become
near perfect.  One reason why I picked this up is that I have >recently 
been
writing more and more scenes with Ranma being depressed or something. > 
Yes
most of my fics in the next month or so will have this as part of the 
theme.  

continue it!! continue it!!! BUT DON'T forget about past/futer 11!! 




Long


                                                         -Famine
                                                      third horseman


"It's the end of the world as we know it....."

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