Okay...comments.

This was fairly well written.

You do need to work on spelling and proofreading a bit...there were 

some

errors here and there.

As for the content? Well...to be honest...

-First mistake: your intro/disclaimer paragraphs. Particularly the 

"suck my

fuckin' dick" spiel. I'm afraid you've confused this mailing list with 

a

juvenile America Online message board. Try to behave with some decorum
here. Or, barring decorum, at least learn how to be juvenile without 

acting

like you just stepped out of the high school boys' bathroom. The rest 

of us

have, which is why when we post we're not ignored by the list populace 

in

general.

-Second mistake: If you're going to write crap, at least write mildly
entertaining crap.

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let me put it like this:  Any spelling errors I make are results of 
typing to fast.  I said it was a five minute job.  I've got a book I'm 
working on, and frankly I thought that was a good job for something that 
wasn't looked over, in which I was just out to prove a point.  Secondly, 
it's not my fault that certain people can't appreciate the inherent 
humor in Guns N' Roses.  I mean, if you DO listen to them, then you 
understand why I would write such a thing.  It IS Axl's trademark quote.
As for my writing abilities, they can be sneaky at times, so don't knock 
'em!

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