I am impressed enough by this chapter to follow your link
and read the rest of the series. Very good and very smooth
writing.
I love the scene where challenge scene where the oni has to
prove Ranma is not a pervert, that scene alone was worth the
rest of the series. each chapter has been improving in style
and this chapter was very very good.
I will be looking forward to chapter 5.
--
Rick Robinson
RICHARDROBINSONJR@prodigy.net


When in danger or in doubt, run in circles,
                    scream and shout.

Always listen to experts. They'll tell you
                    what can't be done, and why. Then do it.

                    Lazarus Long in Time Enough for Love

If violence is not solving your
problems you're just not using enough of it.

     Misato

"I guess I'm just an old-fashioned sentimentalist at heart.
I refuse
 to accept a no-win scenario.  I hate the thought of a
universe without
 justice.  If the maneuverings of dark powers can't be
exposed and
 defeated by the pure of heart, then there's no point in
anything.  I
 can't believe that."
                               -- Benjamin Hutchins