At 06:36 PM 10/14/98 PDT, you wrote:

One minor nit.  Nodoka has indicated that she wanted to wait until the 
girls were married before she brought them over, and that the only 
reason she decided to go ahead was the monster's presence.

So why is she willing to have Nabiki come across, now, when there is no 
immediate danger?  

Ahhh... Have you ever once heard Nodoka refer to these monsters in the
singular? ^_^

This is a fairly major plot point, so I won't be giving it away just yet.

You've clearly indicated that she has at least a 
moderate amount of "traditional" values, in your response about her 
views on lesbianism.  Wouldn't it be likely that she would be worried 
that Nabiki will be inclined to be too 'loose', rather than sticking 
with the same man?  I think at least a scene where she stresses the need 
to be discrete upon Nabiki would be appropriate.

This is fairly valid, but I think that I can address this in the lecture
that Nodoka gives her when she 'signs up'. 

Thanks for the commentary! It really helps!

Chris


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