Subject: Re: [FFML] [Ranma][Fanfic][Revised] Hearts and Minds Prelude 6 -- Shan Pu: Bie Liao
From: KLEPPE@execpc.com (Gary Kleppe)
Date: 10/6/1998, 9:10 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

"Freemage ." <freemage@hotmail.com> wrote:

You know, Gary, there are countries where a sense of humour like that is 
legally punishable by drawing and quartering....  ~_*

I'd move. :)

I think the confusion arose here because, to a lot of people, "modern 
weaponry"="guns", so the reader is left wondering why Cologne can't be 
shot by someone with a .45?  I figured out what you really meant, but 
you might want to make it clearer that you're talking about _heavy_ 
weaponry (artillery, bombs, missiles and the like).

OK, I think I can do that. I know that guns vs. martial artists is a
controversial subject here in fanfic-land. The assumption in HaM is that
it would take the heavy stuff to bring down Cologne -- though I don't
begrudge other people from using different conventions.

I'd recommend casual sex.  I've heard it does wonders.  

Hey, they still haven't had their honeymoon....

I don't know why, but this exchange caused a SPAMfic to germinate in my 
twisted little mind.  It'll be posted later tonight.

Kewl.

Looking forward to the rest!

Thanks for the commentary!


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics