Upon reading the ending on IMBS, I was left with the following 
observation:

Is it just me, or did this end remarkably similar to a Shakespearian 
Tragedy?   I was honestly surpised that as many people lived as they 
did.  I was rather dissapointed that Ukyou died, but the way that her 
and Shan's death were intwined was rather clever - as was the concept of 
"evil" Ranma punishing Shan for the "sin" of killing Ukyou.

On a C&C note, Mariko lets her vendetta slide a little too easily at the 
end IMO.  She never seemed to care about the law before, why now?

Sheesh, you know a fic is good when it brings out the English-class 
tendencies in you.

Oh well, back to Heat Transfer.

-
Chris 'God-boy' Angel


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