Sir,

  This story surpasses the depth and seriousness of your 
previous works.  I like the way that we see hints of the
character of Pluto (with no true confirmation until the 
end).  There is a touch of sadness or perhaps solemnity
that I rarely find in SM fics... yet there is hope at the
same time.

  This was an exercise in characterization that plays 
upon sympathy... I like it very well.

  Regards,

  Helen

  -- when certain writers fall into the realm of the bathetic,
  I would respond: pathetic! ^_^

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