Really an excellent work, very interesting and enjoyable, except for a
few problems:
	Much of the dialogue seems a bit forced. You might wish to rewrite some
of it, as it also has a bit of a repetitive feel to it.
	The writing didn't really have a good "feel" to it. I could tell that a
style between meant to be evocative of Eva and one meant to be evocative
of HP himself, but it comes out almost muddled. A possible solution
would be to alter your words to be more Lovecraftian (Cyclopean, more
descriptions of how foul things are using adjectives instead of
metaphor, obscure words, etc.) and your style to be more Evaish (Terse
mixed with verbose, etc.)


I'm going to assume that the Necronomicon replaces the DSS and that it
wasn't Adam found in Antartica (Convenient, that)

David Siegel
dhs28@columbia.edu
Dada is not dead.
This too, is dada.