Subject: Re: [FFML] [R2096] Vengeance of Heaven
From: Chris Willmore <4cw6@qlink.queensu.ca>
Date: 9/26/1998, 10:57 AM
To: Lara Bartram , fanfic@fanfic.com (FFML)

At 07:43 PM 9/25/98 -0400, Lara Bartram wrote:

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                         The Vengeance of Heaven
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                  by Lara Bartram <lara@emunix.emich.edu>


Nice story, as usual, but wasn't the scene with Ellie and the ostriches just
a BIT too much? x.x  Granted, Kyoofu's tastes in the bedroom are bound to
be twisted, but... Parcheesi?!?!?!? And what's with the broccoli? o.o

Kunou's 'take-over-the-world' speech is hilarious. ^_^ Reminds me of 
ANOTHER pair of lab mice. :P I don't suppose he jumped into Spring of
Drowned Pinky?

All in all, a fine work. =) 

-CW


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