I like the title you've got on it now  ^_^

	It's a little long, but catchy... :)
 

btw....

[snip]

	"A couple days after we ... were together for the first time ..."
She blushes, but obviously understands what I'm saying.  I swallow

the lie

mixed with the truth that follows.  "... I overheard *him* joking

with

some people in the inn where we were staying about the ... the flat-
chested little dummy *he* had to hang around with."  All at once, I

can

hear that mad, insincere laugh of hers again, and I clench my teeth

in

remembered anger and despair.  "I kind of lost my temper," I choke

out.

Is the *him* and *he* a typo? Otherwise, I dn't know which him and he

Lina

heard talking about her

	I wouldn't presume to know exactly what C.D. is thinking at any time,
but I think he meant to imply that although Lina's first encounter was
with Naga, she told Amelia it was with an unnamed guy.  To hit Amelia
with both the fact that Lina had been sexually active and a lesbian
might cause the innocent white magic user to have a migraine.

Jeanne Hedge

Adam Christopher Leigh
Omicron@sprynet.com
http://dogbert.simplenet.com/Tempest/fiction.html