Nice to see that you're finally posting this! ^_^
Anyway, great chapter and hope to see more.  In the meantime, here are
some nitpicks:

On Mon, 21 Sep 1998, Anand Rao wrote:

The Chosen Path
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By: Anand Rao
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a proud Colliding Symphonies Production
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Chapter 1: The First Step
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 mean, when they broke up last week, I thought it was just another one of
 Akane's rages.  I never expected something like this," Nabiki asked.  

	like this," Nabiki <said>. *don't think it should be 'asked'*

 the stairs.  (Ranma, you idiot!  Things were getting peacefully between
 you two, what did you do this time?)  Ryoga had long since given up on

	Things were getting <on> peacefully between *Need a word, the
sentence doesn't sound right*

"Do you remember the day you first arrived here?" Kasumi asked, enjoying

their little game.

"Hey, that was -two- years ago!" Ranma replied.

 *If Ranma's graduating High school, shouldn't that be three?*

(Uh oh.  Man, I'm in for it now!)  Ranma thought, frantically trying to

 remember the party they had held for Kasumi the pervious year.  

	for Kasumi the <previous> year. *spelling*