john McGinnis Sent this to me, and it bounced when I tried to reply, so
I'll post to the list in case anyone else made the same mistake.

At 04:19 PM 9/20/98 -0500, you wrote:

Sorry but I can't say I liked this story.  The sudden reversal on of
personality is not believable.  Though if they became balanced it might
be better.  After all I think Shampoo wouldn't hurt Nabiki after all the
set up you did in earlier chapters.  If I see Nabiki in the Slave role
next chapter you'll likely lose a reader.  Sorry.

Didn't read the disclaimer eh.^_^

this was something I did up for a pre reader who really hated the idea of
Shampoo as a slave, but still gave me good C+C on the story.

As I said at the top, this has nothing to do with the world of Shikima, and
would have no effect on that story.

If you read it again, you will realize that in this story Shikima is a

story Nabiki

is writing on her computer for her own entertainment, and Shampoo found it.

T.H.