Subject: Re: [FFML] [WoT/LaT] [X-Over] Forsaken... ? - Chapter 1
From: "Nick Mcbile" <trikster@hotmail.com>
Date: 9/19/1998, 8:35 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

This is a general outline for a fanfic idea of mine.  Tell me if you
think if I should actually write it.

--

Disclaimers:
    <To lazy to write one...>


Same here

[Wheel of Time/Life and Times] [X-Over] Forsaken... ? - Chapter 1

Scene 1
    Ranma strapped in chair be a guinea pig for Washu.  (Tenchi OVA 7)
Gets sent to WoT when Mihoshi starts touching things.


Very belivable

Scene 2
    Ranma and RyoOhKi is in WoT and RyoOhKi wanders off while Ranma
dresses.

Where did he get his clothes?? Of course where do shampoo and Ryoga get 
theres????

 Trolloc wanders out and attempts to kill (eat) RyoOhKi.  Ranma
saves RyoOhKi and scares the life out of the Trolloc.  Ranma then 
chases
the Trolloc with its own weapon with RyoOhKi close behind.  (Ranma
assumes that the Trolloc is a Youkai)


Whats a Youkai?? do you meen a youma??

Scene 3
    Ranma-chan (changes somewhere in the chase) chases the Trolloc 
into

The Trolloc probibly had a water bottle that it dropped....

a small village threatening it with its weapon.  A very large
blacksmith's wife spot Trolloc and cracks it's skull with a fry pan.
Ranma-chan sees this and pout saying that she wanted to hurt it.
RyoOhKi has perched herself on top of Ranma-chan's head.


That sounds like something Akane would say. It's out of carecter for 
Ranma (particurly the LaT one). Also Trollocs are usually killed. If 
their only nocked out then they will just wake up and attack again.


Scene 4
    Ranma-chan is talking (being interrogated) to the Women's Circle 
as
to why she was chasing the Trolloc.

Belivable but Ranma probibly would not stand still for it. (he would 
barly ever lisen to Cologne)


Scene 5
    Ranma-chan has this sudden urge to go north so she shoulders the
black steel sword. (looks like the sword Shampoo has... what kind of
sword is that?)  She says her good-byes and starts her hike north.
(Note: She doesn't have any traveling pack on her)  Nynaeve doesn't 
like
the fact that the girl will be traveling alone so she says that she 
will
come along since she is going that way.

Largely Unbelivable. Ranma might leave on an urge but Nynaeve probibly 
wouldn't come after seeing what this stranger could do. Also, as far as 
WoT stories go it's easier to insert carecters into later novels sinse 
the first book didn't have any earth shattering events and takes awhile 
to build up and introduce charecters.



End

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                                                      -Trikster


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