Pretty good.  I thought the portrayal of the Buffy cast, especially Xander,
was spot-on, although since I've seen very little Ranma 1/2, I can't comment
on their portrayal.  Only one thing, and it's more a comment than a
criticism....

[Everyone takes a few seconds to collect themselves BUFFY and crew stand
before their savior, a Black haired GIRL with a Pigtail. The girl looks
nervous and is trying to avert her gaze from BUFFY and her friends. The
GIRL looks like she wants to run, but her line of escape is cut off]

I take it from this that this fic is manga-based rather than anime based;
otherwise, Ranma-chan would have red hair, not black.

All in all, a great fic.  Can't wait to see more of it!

Adam Durham
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The black-clad Super-Saiyan continued towards them.  Sailor Mars
pulled out an ofuda and began chanting.  "Rin, pyou, tou, sha..."

Dark Oscar wasted no time.  His red eyes flashed, he cupped his
hands at his side, and energy gathered in them at a rate not even
Ryu could hope to match.  Flinging his hands forward before
anything could be done to stop him, he shouted, "FINAL FLASH!"

Sailor Mars was thrown back twenty feet to crash to the ground.
Her ofuda was incinerated in the initial attack; her fuku burned
through, her chest scorched.  As Cyrax moved to cover his
unconcious girlfriend, Felicia screamed, "You MONSTER!"  She
leaped....

-Excerpt from "Guardians of Earth: Darkstalkers" (A work in progress.)