Nice job on the writing with this one, but like your previous Kagome
story, the extreme pro-Ranma bias makes it hard to digest.

I'm not a Ranma-basher by any standards... I *like* the guy; but I
really can't accept him in the role of innocent victim who isn't at all
responsible for any of his problems.

Just my own opinion on this...


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics