Galaxy Police File 10 Sep 98
Always is reported to have said...
"Consolation," Kuno-chan. One 'l'. Yes, that's true... so substitute
Kodachi... I've seen an Elseworlds fic (was it the original Akane 1/2?)
where they encounter each other, she gets lost with him, and he
teaches her the joy of fighting honorably. Imagine that, a virtuous
Kodachi ^_^ Of course, the fact that there's a precedent makes it
difficult to match or top...
I read that one. I found the match-up to handled poorly; the author
seemed to simply decide that they were going to work out as a couple and
magically changes Kodachi. I didn't buy it, and it ended up being
boring.
1. The phrase match-up to handled poorly is a syntax error.
Also, what AM actually meant to say is ambiguous:
Did AM mean "the match-up to Kodachi"
Too as in "Also" which might be better written as
"Also, I found the match-up was handled poorly."
Too as in overly which might sound better if written:
"I found the match-up was handled too poorly."
Secondly, the ; can be easily eliminated and the remainder broken down into a couple
of shorter sentences.
The author seemed to simply decide that they were going to work out as a couple. Then
the author magically changes Kodachi to make this work. (note: this is an example not an
opinion.)
Watashi wa GP toko Tantei desu