Mark Ferrer wrote:

Co-host: Today, were are here to review <insert name of fic here>. What

did you think about this fic?

The Critic: It sticks!!
 

Typo: 'It stinks!!'  Other than that, an enjoyable fic. Might want to
have more death and dimemberment of the 'Critic' character to be more in
keeping with the spirit of the original manga. 
 

--
Jim Lazar

E-Mail - mailto:jimlazar@earthlink.net
Home - http://home.earthlink.net/~jimlazar
FanFiction - http://home.earthlink.net/~jimlazar/anime

"You made Akane whose daughter?!?!"
"Genma's."
"Has she hit you with her mallet yet?"
"Several times, actually."