Wowee. An EVA lemon that actually makes effective use of dark sexual
imagery. Had the series been about Asuka's thoughts rather than Shinji's
(and had it not been for TV), I wouldn't have been surprised to see this
scene take place in one of the show's many mind-trips.
	The contrast of red blood, white skin, and blue hair gave me the shivers.
The subtle interweaving of the look and smell of LCL with Asuka's mother and
Rei's appearance was even more effective, and gave the piece a resonance
most Eva fics never obtain. The tight and lucid prose carried the imagery
well, without getting in the way.

	All in all, a wonderful piece. Bravo.

Patrick