Where is this fic going? Kunou's Best Friend was a good angle, but 
you're not exploring it. Instead of looking at this side of Kunou, 
you've come up with this useless relationship between two new 
characters.

I've said it before and I'll say it again: The only valid reason for 
introducing new characters is to draw out and explore aspects of a 
canonical character. You're not doing that, and so now you've fallen 
from writing *about* Ranma to writing *in* Ranma.



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