Whoa.
Some points:
1) You might want to check out the piece for mistakes. I did notice a
couple:
(engage nitpick mode)
<<Anyway, I went over to Ranma's restaurant, and I brought up the>>
Ukyou's restraunt (or the Ucchan).
<<marrying. I imagined my nieces and nephews- with Ranma as their>>
Delete the hyphen here. It's not needed here.
<<Saotome. Father was a fool;_I had to be the one responsible for>>
Watch the spacing between sentences (there's 4 present.) And either use "_I_"
or get rid of the underlining.
(end nitpick mode)
That's all of the problems that I found. Now, on to your question.
I'm not really sure what the answer is. On one hand, she did interfere with a
developing relationship for her selfish reasons. IMHO, she has just as big of
an ego as Ranma. Hers is directed towards 1) money and 2) her family. And
her pride in both is the equal of Ranma's pride in his marial arts ability. I
do think that this ws wrong, but she would say that she did it for all of the
right reasons.
Now, on the flip side, I just admitted that she would say that she did it for
the right reasons.
1) Akane wouldn't be satisfied by being a "baby factory."
2) Ranma would hate not being in control of his destiny.
3) Nabiki didn't like Ranma.
Now, the main reason _I_ would say that what Nabiki did was wrong was reason
#3 above. But try telling that to _her_. ^_-
All in all, I found this to be a very well-thought out fanfic. Just make a
few minor corrections, and it should be even better.
James Holzhauer (aka Tobimaro [Ton-chan])
---I really don't care what others think of me, but usually it ends up
hurting you later on in life. (Just try getting a job at a place where the
person doing the hiring doesn't really like you.)
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James Holzhauer (aka Tobimaro [Ton-chan])
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Lum nut, anime fan, and fanfiction reader
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