Somewhere along the line, it evolved into a lost-love story that's 

given 

Happi considerably more heart than even *I* considered him to have.  In 
any case, even 'Kuno-chan' is welcome to give me some suggestions as to 
how to keep it IC... assuming it doesn't wreck the story (and assuming 
he actually *sends* his C&C to authors)

The premise is valid, but your execution leaves me cold. It's just too 
bland.



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