Ucchan, I really, really liked this story.  Not much else I can say but, 

*ahem*

HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO LUM-SAN!!!!!!!!!!

(picking up the big-assed spatula of death)

Now...You...DIE!!!!!

James Holzhauer (aka Tobimaro [Ton-chan])
       ---grrrrr  ^_^
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James Holzhauer (aka Tobimaro [Ton-chan])
      tobimaro@aol.com      http://members.aol.com/Tobimaro/index.html
      Lum nut, anime fan, and fanfiction reader                               
      "All we need to do...is make sure...we keep...talking."
          Pink Floyd  Keep Talking  The Division Bell