In a message dated 9/2/98 11:09:28 PM EST, Freemage writes:
The other part I was unhappy with was the treatment of her father.
Not that I don't think he deserved all of her anger, but you gave the
impression that she did want to mend that bridge, after all. So why
didn't she? Hell, she could have just asked Tsubasa to track him down
again.
Would you believe that I had intended this scene to be a reconciliation
between me and my father? Once I had the scene plotted out in my
head, I realized the whole story was turning into a Saint Ukyou type
of story -- rather inappropriate, in my opinion. This scene gave me a
(severe) imperfection. It also marks the last of my cooking okonomi-yaki...
my soul has gained a regret, now I can no longer make the perfection
I once did. Besides, what's an Ukyou fic without a little angst?
Itsu mo,
Ucchan ^_^
(who's noticed that "Kuno-chan" didn't send his missive to me at all,
just to the FFML. Say, when you gonna write that project of yours,
sugar?)