MY DYING WISH
a Ranma 1/2 fanfiction by Ukyou Kuonji
all characters are the property of Rumiko Takahashi, Shogakukan &c
No infringement is intended

Death fics can be powerful, but only if they're done well. Having sex 
with Ranma as her dying wish is...audacious, but it really doesn't tug 
the heart strings.

Nabiki, Kasumi and Kodachi got left out, and where the hell was Ryouga? 
You can't scrimp with a fic like this or else it'll just be weak.

Ultimately, that is precisely what's wrong with the piece--it's weak. 
The premise is good, but there is so, so much more and better ways to 
handle it than how you did.



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