I hope that this will be the last or second-to-last draft of this 
chapter. I need to get to work on Chapter 2 ^_^


Question: What if the Tendous were related to the Shimerus?


Akane-chan Change

written by Phil Hacker

<<snippity snip>>

Genma surveyed the room. Everyone had calmed down after the initial
confusion, and were now seated in a circle in the livingroom.

"Allow me to introduce myself. I am Genma Saotome. This is my
son..." Genma gestured with his unbandaged right hand. His right eye
was still covered by the patch; the swelling wouldn't go down for
another few days yet.

"Ranma," Ranma concluded.

Nabiki was the first to speak. "So, we finally get to meet the male
Ranma."

"But I thought Father said that he wasn't---" Kasumi began.

"Don't worry, girls. My friend Saotome has taken care of everything."

"Huh?" Ranma asked. He was more confused than he had previously
thought possible. Akane had changed sexes, and done it without water?!

******
When did he see her change??
******

That was my error. Earlier, I had written a scene in which she had 
changed after walking in on him. I forgot to delete that line, but it 
will be fixed in the final draft.


Phil

prohackr@hotmail.com


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