Wow, my VERY FIRST FANFIC IS DONE!!!!!!! Funny, though, I never thought 

it

would be a sadfic. Oh, well, what's done is done, for better or worse. 

=)

My first instinct is to point out the hideous OOC characterisations and 
the lack of direction. However, this type of fic has merit, and it 
hasn't been done properly yet. If this were to be fleshed out--don't 
worry about the actual death, it isn't important--this would make a fine 
fic indeed. I would write it myself, but I'm too embroiled in my current 
project.

If it interests you, if you think about it and get excited, run with it. 
Don't hold back.


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