| Subject: Re: [FFML] [fanfic] [R 1/2] [FKC] Akane-chan Change chapter 1, 2nd draft |
| From: "John Lemon" <jlemon@hotmail.com> |
| Date: 8/30/1998, 9:59 PM |
| To: prohackr@hotmail.com |
| CC: ffml@fanfic.com |
"There's no way I'm marrying some pervert!">>"Who're you calling a pervert?!" Ranma demanded. "You're the
freaks!">
Actually.... where _did_ the pervert crack come from? It just seems to
fly out of nowhere. Akane has no reason to start thinking "pervert".
Okay. Any suggestions for an argument-opener, anyone? Simple. Make that RANMA's opening line. --John Know's nada 'bout grammer. ______________________________________________________ Get Your Private, Free Email at http://www.hotmail.com