Subject: Re: [FFML] [fanfic] [R 1/2] [FKC] Akane-chan Change chapter 1, 2nd draft
From: "John Lemon" <jlemon@hotmail.com>
Date: 8/30/1998, 9:59 PM
To: prohackr@hotmail.com
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

"There's no way I'm marrying some pervert!">> 
"Who're you calling a pervert?!" Ranma demanded. "You're the 
freaks!">
Actually.... where _did_ the pervert crack come from?  It just seems to
fly out of nowhere.  Akane has no reason to start thinking "pervert".
Okay. Any suggestions for an argument-opener, anyone?

Simple. Make that RANMA's opening line.



--John
Know's nada 'bout grammer.


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