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C&C would be very much appreciated.

I won't comment on the grammar or spelling errors, god knows I've made a 
lot in my own fanfics,  though I did spot a few of them.  The overall 
effect I guess made me look at it like it was rushed to be made. 

I liked the fic, the title made me curious to what other fears Ranma 
might have, and kept that curiousity going up to the end. Good job. Oh 
yeah, I liked the ending to, surprise endings always makes me smile.  
^_^ 

Anyway, keep it up ok.

Sincerely
Kahlil Noriega

"Ranma 1/2 A Chinese Ghost Story"

" Frost fills the sky over Ten Mile Lake,
  Silken threads anxious of youth....
  Looking at the moon and feeling lonely...
  Envious of lovers, not of immortality.
  Envious of love, not of immortality. " 

        - Excerpt from the movie " A Chinese Ghost Story "

The anything goes Ranma 1/2 Fanfiction page:
http://www.geocities.com/tokyo/temple/9371

E-Mail:
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