Hmm. It looks like a good beginning, certainly. However, do fix up
your quote marks. They're appearing as high-ascii characters; I think you
may have left them in as smart-quotes, and it doesn't work with most email
readers.
I can't say much more, since it's so short. I do applaud your
research efforts, in naming the exact days that certain things happened.
Though...I'm not sure if Yui actually did know about Rei. I'll have to
check my sources.
Andrew Huang
http://www.hcs.harvard.edu/~alhuang/
Harvard Anime Society, President
Wanted for taking the derivative of e^x