GP FILE 29 Aug 98
SUBJECT: David Johnston
AT: 20:14
David Johnston wrote :
Remember, the key rule for any dialogue is Short and Sweet. This isn't a
matter of taste, this a rule of story-telling.. The best fanfic authors
don't do it, and neither do any published writers.
Yeah. Shakespeare sucks. Eh-heh-heh-heh...
Short & Sweet huh? I thought that was artificial sweetener!
That would mean 3 things.
1. No villain's monologue in which he/she reveals his/her true intentions
2. No words of advice from elder to hero.
3. Kuno would either be very out of character or he wouldn't get a word in edgewise.
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