All right.  Let's try this "public C&C" thing.  After all, I'm thousands
of miles away from you, so, a-ha, I'm safe from 'most anything except
letter-bombs...

*grin*  Ain't it the tooth...  ^_-

[snip]

    "Prithee, what is the matter with you, man?" Tatewaki asked
his servant.

Maybe it's just me, but "man" sounds wrong.  "Fool" might perhaps be more
appropriate, especially for Kuno speaking to Sasuke.  (Or, okay, just about
anybody speaking to Sasuke.)  Oh, and in the complete opposite direction,
"prithee" might just be too _polite_ for Kuno -- especially, again, when
speaking to Sasuke.

Learning King's English grammar might help, too.  'you' is the plural 
pronoun, and 'ye' is the singular.  And 'prithee' _is_ too polite for the 
likes of Kuno.  ;)

Okay, that ends _my_ abortive attempt at public C&C...  *snicker*


Damon Casale, damoo@jps.net
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