Okay, I read the second draft. Having missed the first one, this was 
my first read-through, and I have a few things to say... ^_^

Oh, I would just like to point out that since my comments may
have sounded a bit overly negative, I *do* agree with most of
Adam's comments. I guess it's easier to complain about what
you don't like than point out what you do, ne?


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Ronny Hedin, thark@hem2.passagen.se, http://nabiki.newberry.edu/thark/
        "So, they aren't extraterrestials?"
        "Nope, they're manga characters who've lost their hair."
        (the unexpected end of X-files)