On 27 Aug 98, at 9:16, Ronny Hedin wrote:

Okay, I read the second draft. Having missed the first one, this was 
my first read-through, and I have a few things to say... ^_^

Oh, I would just like to point out that since my comments may
have sounded a bit overly negative, I *do* agree with most of
Adam's comments. I guess it's easier to complain about what
you don't like than point out what you do, ne?

You will address me as underclassman!

Err... I mean...

Yeah, sometimes writing all the negative C&C can blot out the fact 
that you actually liked the fic... I always try to remember that. 
^_^;;

Adam-kohai

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